Comments on: Bonds That Break

By: Chuck W. Tadd

Chuck W. Tadd — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 23:33:37 +0000

Keep writing. Your ability to draw on real life experiences is something special.

Kathleen A. Ryan — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 00:27:22 +0000

Sounds like it was a tough childhood for both of you, and life still holds many challenges for Ethan, and you have that “big brother” obligation…

The ending is phenomenal. One of the many lines that struck me:

“I hid from their terror, from their violence. I still hide.”

I wish you both the best. Your essay is beautifully written.

Dallin — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 13:28:40 +0000

“I have been trying to save my brother all afternoon.” Great line, fits perfectly.

Janelle — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 16:16:23 +0000

“I place my palm against his cheek and inherit the warmth.” Beautiful ending.